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<pony><original> Scootaloop

Postby Unknownponyy » 01 Mar 2012 19:46



Very simple, but quite catchy!
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Re: <pony><original> Scootaloop

Postby vladnuke » 01 Mar 2012 22:28

Eh, it's experimental? Idk about catchy, it's 4 notes with beat, not a lot to go from there. The visuals were great though! As for the music, it's kinda, erm, boring and repetitive, sorry.
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Re: <pony><original> Scootaloop

Postby Unknownponyy » 02 Mar 2012 04:53

vladnuke wrote:repetitive

Hence the name, ScootaLOOP.

The song came from me making the beat that's looped here, and I just loved that beat so I made this and I've had a few people tell me they had no clue it was repeating intill 3 minutes.

But, this is again, and intro track, not really being overly creative with an intro track
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Re: <pony><original> Scootaloop

Postby Freewave » 03 Mar 2012 11:00

Well, i get the concept (and its a decent one) but as an actuality it kinda fails. if you expect people to figure out its a loop and skip the rest of the track then its almost trolling your audience just to put faith in your concept. Personally if you took that loop and added the same melody with other instruments (or an alternate melody) you could still reinforce your concept AND people might want to hear it all the way through w/o it getting boring. As it is its just 5 min of a short loop and no one will want to listen to that throughout.
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Re: <pony><original> Scootaloop

Postby bigBerd » 04 Mar 2012 16:47

This sounds like it could use an emcee. :3

Anyhow, if it is an intro track of sorts, it should probably be a lot shorter. Like Pon-3 said, 5 minutes is a bit much to be listening to the same ten-second sequence.
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Re: <pony><original> Scootaloop

Postby colortwelve » 04 Mar 2012 18:55

While I will agree with catchy, catchy can go too far when it's looped for 5 minutes. And like Pon-3 said, the concept is pretty much the best part.

But it could be saved. Shorten it up a bit, add some progression with other layers of synths or pads or something, add some drum progression. Really, anything that a good producer would do to this would make it better, it doesn't even need to be that much.
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Re: <pony><original> Scootaloop

Postby Unknownponyy » 04 Mar 2012 21:00

I think, I will bring it back down to 2 minutes, and add some pads, but, keep this version up because I know of a good amount of people that don't want it changed.
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