<pony><original> Mazzive - Fluttershy's Plan (Maybe Final)

[Mazzive]

Now i configurated my latest "track", ALOT! But yeah, i hope it got better, give me some constructive critism. Enjoy!

http://soundcloud.com/mazzive-2/mazzive-fluttershys-plan-maybe

[DrSorkenstein]

Production wise it's a lot better, I'm digging the rising and falling bass at 0.55 and the final part is pretty good. However it feels a bit disjointed to me. I count to five different and very distinct sections where the track starts over again. See if you can connect them together to make the track flow smoother.

Top end feels a bit empty and the drums are a bit repetetive. Don't be discouraged however! You did a huge leap between this version and the last one. It's shaping up really well!

[Freewave]

yeah this is sounding like quite an improvement over the initial versions. a little disjointed still but less so then before. coming along. you might want to get db glitch and there and create some havok in some of the more repetititve sections. could go for some sicker sounds as its kind of in a middle area of whether it wants to be clean or dirrrty dubstep...

[AerieFlew]

Haha even disjointed it's cool. I mean if you aren't trying to make five songs, then it doesn't work, but if you are, it is brilliant. I like the idea of the stopping. XP personal preference/

[Mazzive]

I count to five different and very distinct sections where the track starts over again. See if you can connect them together to make the track flow smoother.

Yeah, i was trying that, but when i tried i got it, extremly strange, because the dubstep sounds from each section is extremly different. But i don't know that i'm just gonna take the best one of them. (Drop). And then save the others, and use them in a new track, in the future. And the best one will then just get some modifications, a good example could be "Rainbow NukeStep". What do you think, would that may be the smartest thing to do?

[DrSorkenstein]

I count to five different and very distinct sections where the track starts over again. See if you can connect them together to make the track flow smoother.

Yeah, i was trying that, but when i tried i got it, extremly strange, because the dubstep sounds from each section is extremly different. But i don't know that i'm just gonna take the best one of them. (Drop). And then save the others, and use them in a new track, in the future. And the best one will then just get some modifications, a good example could be "Rainbow NukeStep". What do you think, would that may be the smartest thing to do?

Depends on what you want to do and where you want to go with it. The sections that stick out to me are the intro and the "you're" buildup. The other three seem to work pretty well on a second listening (since the first and final drops are thematically similiar). So one idea could be to build the track around those sections and add some section in between that stick closer to the theme of those other sections.

[Mazzive]

I count to five different and very distinct sections where the track starts over again. See if you can connect them together to make the track flow smoother.

Yeah, i was trying that, but when i tried i got it, extremly strange, because the dubstep sounds from each section is extremly different. But i don't know that i'm just gonna take the best one of them. (Drop). And then save the others, and use them in a new track, in the future. And the best one will then just get some modifications, a good example could be "Rainbow NukeStep". What do you think, would that may be the smartest thing to do?

Depends on what you want to do and where you want to go with it. The sections that stick out to me are the intro and the "you're" buildup. The other three seem to work pretty well on a second listening (since the first and final drops are thematically similiar). So one idea could be to build the track around those sections and add some section in between that stick closer to the theme of those other sections.

Okay, i will try my best.