http://dl.dropbox.com/u/50896209/Sample.mp3
So while I'm busy doing a metric shit ton of other homework, I figured I might as well put this up for feedback! Obviously, things aren't done (I need to add vocals, the wobble section isn't completed, I'd like to add some more moving synth lines, and it's not mixed at all), but I'd like any and all feedback on the song as a whole!
Lyrics that I'm going to add:
Yeah, I know it's chilly outside
But you know why I came
You once sat here starry-eyed
You know I was the same
I'm sure you aren't too out-of-place
Wherever you are
It's hard to remember your face
when you're as far as the stars
It shouldn't've come as a surprise at all
I know we've all got to say goodbye
But you never seem to be there when I call
Maybe I'm just singing to a blank sky