Not bad for a first effort on the composition tip. Coming from ears untrained and inexperienced in electronic music, I think you need to experiment with stuff that fills the gap between notes (whether that be complementing rhythms by other instruments, or just effects like echo/reverb/what have you) and keep a close eye on your mixing levels, because they are getting a little too loud at points and it is in fact clipping.
MGDerpyHooves wrote:My comfort zone is mainly sticking to what I know (but that won't get me anywhere) so I am ready to branch out to any opportunity, genre, whatever it is to better myself and show some diversity in my music.
Well, when I said comfort zone, I meant more genre/subgenre. You say you're most well-versed in electronic music; what kind of electronic music do you find most fun or easy to compose in? Complextro? House? What subgenres of music have you already made? etc. etc. And by branching out, I meant is there any part of music that you look at and say, "I want to learn how to make music like that"?
Of course, we all want to get better musically (I hope). Art's more fun if we improve, no? So if you want to collaborate, what do you hope to learn by doing so?
As a somewhat related note to a few things you discussed in your previous post, I hope you're clear on the fact that the path of music is not easy. You're going to have to learn from a lot of people, people who aren't necessarily there to teach but teach you something anyway, and while some may be nice and forgiving, others can (and in some cases will) crush you to pebbles. It's up to you whether you're strong enough to pull yourself up for all you're worth when the rope slackens, or let go and fall into the lava when it grows taut.