A noobie lyricist

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A noobie lyricist

Postby Qcom » 15 Aug 2011 23:24

Hello, I hope Iposted this in the right place. I was pointed here by dj shamrock in Celestia radio.

I have a small set of lyrics focusing on trixie after listening to a waltz for trixie.

I was wondering if anyone would like to compose music for this? I have a sample of me singing what I believe is the melody if anyone's interested.

the lyrics

a little blue pooony
all alone
you try to be the greatest
but now no one knows

your lights and flash so pretty
as you strike awwwe
you give a bow do a dance and seee
yet they are all gonnne

great and powerful you were called
ponies came and looked in awe
they would look up at you and stare
as they all gave apllause


and then that fateful night
everything went wrong
and ursa minor appeared
and proved a flaw

they all saw what you had become
when you were defeated
just a crook a sham
and your fame depleated

what do you do now
now that you are done?
will you hang up your cape and your hat?
as this song is sung.
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Re: A noobie lyricist

Postby Makkon » 15 Aug 2011 23:47

Hey bro! If you get yourself a good mic, and work out the melody, I wouldn't mind taking a whack at this. :)
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Re: A noobie lyricist

Postby Qcom » 15 Aug 2011 23:58

Thanks makkon!

heres the melody I sang half heartedly cause i was still getting it in my head.

http://soundcloud.com/qcom/trix-sing-take-1
also, Im sharing a song i wrote and sang based on ultimate showdown of ultimate destiny. though my timing is slightly off.

http://soundcloud.com/qcom/ultimate-radio-of-ultimate
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