Everypony's Non-Pony/Pony Freestyle Rap Lyrics

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Everypony's Non-Pony/Pony Freestyle Rap Lyrics

Postby DJColeTPony » 03 May 2013 20:48

I was bored. I want you to make some rap lyrics
I am a alicorn pony horse. The pony you can rap.
I'm not going to rape you. I'm M.C Bro. Of PewDiePie
I wanna be a pegasister and i'm not a girl.
I'm proud to be a toonami faithful. Strong and gold.
Your turn.
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Re: Everypony's Non-Pony/Pony Freestyle Rap Lyrics

Postby Nine Volt » 03 May 2013 21:42

I'm sorry, what?

You had 15 syllables in the first 2 lines, 14 in the 3rd, and 13 in the last. And none of them rhymed. And they were just awkwardly worded in general and pretty incoherent.

Sorry, I just don't see what this is supposed to be.
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Re: Everypony's Non-Pony/Pony Freestyle Rap Lyrics

Postby LoreRD » 04 May 2013 09:18

Oh not again....


(And wrong subforum, this subforum is for actual album events. Move this thread to "doodles and scribbles". THAT'S where lyrics are supposed to be)
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Re: Everypony's Non-Pony/Pony Freestyle Rap Lyrics

Postby DXsmiley » 06 May 2013 04:13

I don't even know what this is about.
You should get some better lyrics before the week's out.

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