Advice on new logo

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Advice on new logo

Postby oddboy18 » 08 Mar 2013 19:42

Hello, everypony. I've been looking at my current logo for my music.....and I hate it. I just don't think I should use this anymore:

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So I've been doodling with flash and came up with this:
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I love the arrangement of the text. I think it's a keeper, but here's the problem. This is it. I can't think of what to put on it to make it more interesting. Anyone have any ideas?
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Re: Advice on new logo

Postby Alycs » 08 Mar 2013 21:07

I think that the reason it feels uninteresting is that it is only the name. While it has a nice set up, it needs to have a little more flesh. Either accent certain letters by making them larger, or add extra lines to give depth. Even a little Gaussian Blur would do great to adding depth.

Also, the second O's line thickness is a lot less than the others (I suspect a Ctrl+C, Ctrl+V from the previous) which makes it a little jarring.

It has a good start, but needs a little definition.
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