AAs remix of likea spinning record Rap-over lyrics thoughts?

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AAs remix of likea spinning record Rap-over lyrics thoughts?

Postby Applecap » 18 Apr 2012 17:15

like a spinning record artattack remix rap over
0:36
You know you'll never lose it
but you try to stick down your path only cause you choose it and you don't give
up and just try to get through it
cause you always end up lonely if you're the one and the only and you've gotten all cooped up inside an just wanna be with somepony
and you know it isn't fair but your fans don't care so you try to barely show it and just hope nobody knows it
and you've begun to wonder why you even started it here and how you wish
you had departed from your music career
before you got so famous that you can't quit out of fear of the ridicule you'll hear from whoever holds your music dear
or if you don't keep up with the demands your fans are makin no matter
all the hard work keepin up is takin but maybe hopefully you're just mistaken and
they’d actually love you like bacon just for not selling out for more profit to rake in

2:22
you’re the queen of spinning
records with the big ass double deckers and your kickin so much ass like you've you’ve got all kings in checkers
even if under that mask of you having fun
You still just see an easy task you need to get done
and you don’t even care about the last competition you won.
Cause there’s no challenge, no real desire an you've gotten so good that you can’t get any higher
On the echelon of all these house musicians
Fresh upon them with all these new compositions and ponies pay for admission and you gain more recognition
even if you still disdain the competition
just know that you’re always gonna be the best cause even if you're depressed and in this mess with all this stress there’s still that talent you got unlike the rest and you need to sit back and realize that every choice you make is optional even if it feels
like all the outcomes aren't optimal
and don't forget how your music’s unstoppable
with beats so hot it melts the crowd like popsicle
even if you think living this career’s impossible the chance of it ending so easy is pretty damn improbable.

it’s practically become an addiction
the music and the rendition or that feeling you get when you crush the
competition or the rush of adrenaline but you try not to let it in cause of how
it clouds your vision but its already settin in so just try to settle down
cause your shows about to begin.

You're already on top of the
chain of the best and you wanna back down and give your brain a rest
maybe take a vacation to try to decompress and assess how your life has
become this mess
But you try not to show it
and you just keep on going even with your music and if fans could outgrow
it you’re not going to let this
fame get the best a ya well maybe a little bit you’re practicly the most
stressed in Equestria and some would even say more so than Celestia.

4:44
You've been working so hard
for so long yet you're keeping music so original and strong
And even when your time at the club ends you just head on home to more music that depends on your hard work and it barred you from sleep cause yours eyes are getting so starred that
its hard just to see
But it’s the music that you’ve given it up for
since once you had time to yourself but now you don’t anymore
but even without rest you just try
to endure cause the passion in your music rocks you down to the core and you
picture in your mind all the ponies on the floor that are screaming for more
and you can’t wait to show them what you’ve got in store cause that’s what you
live for not the competition or even being the best you're just trying to relieve
the pressure that’s your chest
cause even if you love it you still got ponies
telling you to shove it it’s like they think that you can’t even get enough of
it but even if you tell yourself that you're too tough for it it’s still it
in that part of your brain where you have far too much of it
5:55

Well im 40% sure im doing this in all sorts of wrong ways and kindof kicking myself for choosing a moombahcore beat but please tell me what you think of it and if its complete garbage tell me so cause honestly i would much rather have you guys tell me than people on youtube and after i spent a couple hours recoding it but if it turns out they are fine then maybe some advice to make them better? thanks
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Re: AAs remix of likea spinning record Rap-over lyrics thoug

Postby Marshmelon » 14 Oct 2012 22:48

Ok, I know, necropost, but this is relevant to my interests.

Could you do a demo for it (&dropbox)? I really have no idea how it's supposed to flow.
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