I wrote a story!

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I wrote a story!

Postby Dr_Dissonance » 07 Jul 2011 22:16

WHAT WAS I THINKING!?!?!?

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/s ... reams.html

So, I always have at least one score on the go for study...for the past month, it's been "Dam Sheon Hachol" (1992) by Chaya Czernowin, composer extraordinare and current head composition lecturer at Harvard University! She has written some amazing pieces, but Dam Sheon Hachol is in my top 5 favourite pieces of all time!

Anyway, a friend from the real world was writing a fanfic, which is now in the Fallout Side Stories article, titled "Fallout Ardenalia", it inspired me to blurt out a story of my own based on this piece!

My friends thought it was good and said I should submit it to EqD...so I did...and it was accepted!
Turns out, I'm not too bad at writing stories either!

Anyway, that's my story for the day...

Feedback/criticism is always appreciated!
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Re: I wrote a story!

Postby Evdog » 23 Jan 2012 01:09

It's written well, but it feels inconclusive. It needs a part two.

Are you any good at satire and comedy? If so, could you please jump over to this thread?

Also, we're both Australian, so I'm friending you. *glomp*
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Re: I wrote a story!

Postby Dr_Dissonance » 28 Jan 2012 04:53

OH GOD, this is so old...
And was for funsies! It is a story to accompany my favourite piece, so I don't plan on continuing it. If I write stories, they're usually not pony related...usually...
And I'll take a look at that thing linked!
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You are the hero My Little Remix deserves, not the one it needs.
So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
You’re a silent guardian of music, a watchful protector of songs.
A doctor of dissonance.
-Phillypu
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Re: I wrote a story!

Postby Icky » 28 Jan 2012 06:11

Wow Dr Dissonance great story, and amazing song that fitted the story so well! bravo.
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