Brony Parody WIP. Please check it out and critique!

[TheElegantOne]

Hey, there!

Since i was relatively new to making music, i had the idea to "Rewrite" a song into a parody.

It is a parody of Born this way, and i am probably about a 1/4 through. Here is the link to what i have so far! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNC ... sp=sharing

Please post and changes i should make plus any ideas for the other parts!

[Friv]

next time post your music in here.

[itroitnyah]

Hm, the idea behind it is pretty funny, it'd work more as comendy than an actual song that you could listen to or anything.

The lyrics are ok, you have to add in parts or remove parts as they are either more sylabuls than the original lyrics of the song, and a lot of the parts don't seem to flow very well.